Friday, December 12, 2025

Friday Fiction: Oaken Smials


OAKEN SMIALS

 

There is a place that I can go

When I am sad and feeling low.

It is not far; it's close as thought;

It is a dream that I have caught.

 

It is a place called Oaken Smials.

I go to visit it a while

When I feel blue. I close my eyes,

I muse a bit, and there it lies.

 

It stands upon a lawn with trees

That shade, and dance with every breeze.

Its frame is oak, and granite stones

Support that frame like sturdy bones.

 

It has tower and tunnel, hall and stair,

And stained glass twinkles here and there.

Brass gleams on doors and window frames;

A hearthstone wards the chimney flames.

 

Blue china, in the kitchen, glows,

By pewter mugs ranged row on row.

The larder's full of food and drink

Of all the good kind one could think.

 

There are comfy chairs and shelves of books

And window seats in hidden nooks;

Grandfather clocks chiming hours keep;

There, soft white beds that nurture sleep.

 

There are hidden cellars and attic rooms;

There are sunny spots and shady glooms.

The house is snug, yet somehow spacious,

Its plan is cozy, but capacious.

 

But always I must leave that place

And present life and troubles face,

Though I return with heart renewed,

And I know the dream is far from through.

 

For dreams have come true before now.

And once again I make my vow:

That Oaken Smials shall one day be,

And there we'll dwell, most joyously.


Notes

I've had a vision of a perfect house for many years, starting perhaps with reading the poem The Shiny Little House(by Nancy M. Hayes?) in Fourth Grade, deepened with descriptions of Badger's House in The Wind in the Willows, Merlin's Cottage in The Sword in the Stone, and of course Bag End in The Hobbit (odd, that; I think I read all of those in the same year; definitely in middle school). Even now I try to make the Guest House as close an approximation of Oaken Smials as I can; it is like a pale,gleaming shadow of that Platonic ideal. I wrote this poem ... oh, years ago now, probably as far back as the Eighties.


Illustration from the 1949 Childcraft

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